url to my fairy tale

https://docs.google.com/viewer?a=v&pid=explorer&chrome=true&srcid=1I6c_Nqs0TIXLY2puOEY7lemkk0N6KCUULEsQyeHjNttKmMuRUOmOmnuzmR5y&hl=en_US

an example of fairy tale

the bamboo
the clue that shows us this is a fairy tale is the magic in this story. When the man in this story says, " Longer", the bamboo will be longer. when the man in this story says," Shorter" the bamboo will be shorter.

Why my famili is important to me?

My family is important to me because it makes me fell good and I have someone to talk to. If my family disappear, I will fell lonely and might going to crazy.

goal for improvment

I need to be more confident next time. I can achieve this goal by practicing at home

fedback sandwich

I looked at the audiences.

I'd like to improve my voice because it's very quiet.

I was more confident then last time.